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To: Noelle
Subject: Re: R3 Home — thoughts + let's sync
Hey Noelle,
Got R3 — and wow, you killed it. Three solid directions to work with. Here's where my head's at:
Overall reaction
YOUR IMPRESSION
[YOUR IMPRESSION — e.g. "V2 felt closest. The darker palette is more 'us.' Or V1 has that warm editorial feel we've been after."]
Typography
YOUR REACTION
[YOUR REACTION — which version's type feels closest to "High Standards, Low Maintenance"? What's working / what's not?]
Color
YOUR COLOR PREFERENCES
[YOUR COLOR PREFERENCES — any of the three palettes feel right? Do you want to mix elements across versions?]
Layout & shapes
YOUR LAYOUT NOTES
[WHAT WORKS / WHAT DOESN'T — any particular layout elements you want to carry forward? Any mix-and-match ideas?]
Graphic elements
PIQWHEEL VERDICT
[Love it / it's ok / scrap it / needs adjustment — and why]
SCRIBBLES VERDICT
[Which version's scribbles work?]
DRAWN NUMBERS VERDICT
[Thumbs up or down?]
Textures
TEXTURE VERDICT
[WHICH TEXTURES TO KEEP / TOSS — any backgrounds you want to carry into the next round?]
Image style
YOUR VISION
[YOUR VISION — moody lifestyle with hands as hero? Clean editorial? Something else? What should we avoid?]
Packaging review — IRL meeting
MEETING REQUEST
Would love to get together IRL to look at packaging samples. I'm free:
- Mon after 3pm
- Tue after 11:30am
- Wed after 1pm (though I have a 2pm meeting, so Wed might be tight)
YOUR AVAILABILITY
[YOUR PREFERRED SLOT]
Let me know what works for you — or if you want to hop on a quick call instead.
Cheers,
Gin
Piqki · Press-on and press on.
QC Check: All feedback dimensions covered ✓ · IRL meeting with time slots ✓ · Tone: warm/direct/collaborative ✓ · Brackets empty/descriptive ✓